Hey this is a really nice poem, because, seriously if the one you want leaves you it's like hell, and all what you expressed in your poem is what mostly happens or feels like or resembles, lol so yea really nice poem keep it up! and plz if its ok could you plz check out my new poem "Just Missing You" I'll appreciate it a lot, because this poem was written truly in a very gloomy moment. AnYwAyZ! ttyl Peace = )