not your typical rhyming poem which makes this poem great. i love poets who can not rhyme and still have awesome pieces. great job, well done!

that was a great poem. it really felt like it was from the heart. a definate 5/5.

thanks rach........i have to put up a poem for you now.......its so true.....and one day we'll relize that the bonds of friendship.....will last forever....for the have helped me through so much......when others weren't there.....so thanks....i hope you'll appericate my poem as much as i tureaser your....
luv ya
bee

WOW raxcel i loved that, it was totally aweosme, can i cling to you too? I am afriad of being washed away....(:
LUV YA! -ali

you are truely amazing... great poem... and thank-you for the comment you left me... it really meant alot.... more than you may ever know... anyway I look forward to reading more of your poems...

Great job, obvously tied to your emotoins and relatoinship to you sister-er I mean heartfelt. It has a great flow, I'm a big fan of the flow... Sorry but that's about all I can say, I'm not a super great genius writer or anything.

I wish i could say that to my sister. taht was amazing insight and everything. hard times can only get better.