Hey i love that poem by the way this is susan in case you didn't kno....anywayz keep it up...maybe you could become pro someday...hehehe

~SuSaN~

That was very good reminds me o me and my girlfriend id love it if you rated and commented some of my poems thanks 5/5

Hey fool this poems hits the spot, cuz it sucks!! just kidding like you told me nah this poem is kool man. keep it real

viktim

Man i have to comment again on the poem. this poem freaking rocks like linkin park. nah not that good, lol but its kool man.

This poem is awsome dude. you rock man.

I'm crying....*i really am...*...

I love it! i totally understand what you mean by ''no one can tell if I'm crying
no one can tell if I'm dying'' anyway good job!-xxx-

Wow this is a great poem I really liked it
Leona