Very nice poem.

Wow, awsome poem. I loved it.

~ItalianStallion A.K.A. Joe~

Wow

That wuz a good poem keep up the good work

xoxo
jayme

Very intersting structure, your words are very different...i really like this part
the lips i kissed
that made you cry
and when i Kissed you
with these lips
you thought it felt the same

well done.....luv em

Very good poem.. liked your style
Love Always Tiffany Heather

Hm... intersting. good. but interesting. i'm kind of curious to hear if there is a story behind this.... anyways, good job! :)