wow great writing.. i love reading your work..Sorry i havnt been readin them like it dont tell me when ppl got new work..But i guess i'll just have 2 check 4 myself..great write i loved it..stay strong..<3 lindsey

I can totally relate, I love this poem keep it up

Jenn

Harley i love this one..awesome job...it was really good..i mean your feelings were just so real..hope your doin ok..if u ever need 2 talk email at lilfoxxy072002@yahoo.com...

Tears I cry
Blood I shed
Pain I feel
Failure I am
Scars I have
Shadows I'm afraid
Fears of mine
Cry to make it go away
Broken I am
Lonely I will be
For no one's there waiting for me

Just thought it will be nice to use the words from every first word from the first line of the sentences of your poem. Anyway that's what i feel, Nice poem. 5/5.