woah thats actually a well good poem,bravo :)

thats really good

I love this poem alot. Thanks for commenting on my poem Can you hear me... with the alternate ending i just wanted to let you know i now have the original one up to if you wanna cheak that out. thanks again and this poem is pretty amazing..your not afraid to let everythign out i liek that. Lulu

Hey grt poem thanx for reading mine

I loved this poem. u have a lot of talent, keep on writing!!! thanx for checking out mine!