oh brit... thats mad... its sad... go a part 2.... who it bout or is it jst a random 1...?

Nicelty written

I likes the cut of your jib. Thanks for the comment, I really like your works, keep up the good work!

I decided I better comment so I don't get my head bashed in...HAHA

In so little words you made such a powerful poem...very nicely done...My ONLY suggestion (though in this particular piece it worked) is next time try to avoid starting lines in the same stanza with the same words...it DID work in this piece and I did like it through and through...it's just an idea. Very nicely done!