WOW. That was really good, and well developed. I see that you have talent and should keep writing. I would also appreciate it if you were to read, rate, and comment, on as many of my poems as you want, and you could tell your friends or other people. I'm just trying to et my work out there. So thanx, and keep writing GREAT work!

-Frank :D

another beautiful poem...keep up the good work

Very beautiful....great job.
hugs, love, Ann