I love this poem so much. its almost like a remake of romeo & juliet in a way LOL. the feel and the flow are really nice and i can c u have tons of talent. thank u for commenting on 1 of my poems, realllllyy appreciate it hun. keep doing ur thing!! 5/5!! excellent.

This poem is soooo cute and sad! I absolutely love it and probably because I used to be able to relate to this so well! This is awesome and your a great poet! Keep up the great work!
~ Marianna

Thats brilliant i reallly love your work-def a favourite! keep it up :-)