Kinda reminds me of my past...from reading this, it seems like you are writing this poem to a friend, showing her support. It's good to know there are still genuine friends in this world....good poem.

Very good.. I voted a 5 =D hugs!!

That was really well written!!! I like your style! it flowed, it was awesome, and the rhyming was perfect! 5/5 for sure!

Awww its cute

That is beautiful, you are a great writer

Your flow is amazing your such a good writer keep up the amazing work 5.5

Awww very sweet poem.

It's short, simple and very sweet! it's very well writen and flows nicely. i can kind of relate to it in ways.

~Jacklyn

That flowed so well. i hope i can write as good as you when i grow up that was amazing