I like your poems there real strong wel the words are. or wutever yo get wut i mean th gurl u writting about must be a saint or you love her that much. words you right is how all men should think like if you got wut i'm saying.

WOW you are a good poet!!!

-Joe(im a girl)

Very good poem Collin
she's the ocean that washes up treasures on my sand

I like that line :)

I loved this one, you really know how to use words
5/5 :)
take care.

adios!

-pili

Hey i talked to u on chat email me !!
ashley44putter@aim.com
thanxs love ya

Ok dis is gd, but u no i'm not 1 for loadsa slang. but its goos and the meaning is there

OHMGSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO WAY i lvoed the ryhme..it was so friggn sweet...wow OMGSHHHHHHHHH..THIS IS THE BEST YOU:VE WRITTEN. Colli nthsi was so sweeet nad wow wow wow wow wow wow...x's 100 lol

ur sis
lissa