Very nice

Very nice

Aww that is so sweet!!! your really awesome at this

Damnn..thats so sweet..wow...u make me miss my gf..nice dude...its a great one...

Hey
i really like your poem. its really deep. and i can relate! read some of my poems and comment them and rate them if u want!

Thats a cute one hun. cant wait to read more:)

Jenn

I LOVE THIS ONE EVEN MORE ... love the rhyming

That is so sweet she has to be lucky

Aww i love this poem!!

Wow, soulfull, i love this poem its really diff from all lost love poems, im sorry you didnt get her, by the sounds your far too good 4 her anyway, you loved her, put she wud neva love you the way you love her. chin up aye dude.xo

Ohhhhhh myyyyy goddddd
I LOVE THIS POEM
its just great the words everything
i think ur awsome
it was so sweet well done keep it up

EXCELLENT METAPPHORS>.it rly made the poem POP..wow i lvoed it each analogy was well thogught out and i lvoe everythign ,the beat and WOW

lissa