Comments : Mystery of the Trivial Rose

  • 18 years ago

    by Deaths Maiden

    I have no inkling of what it is you should call your poem I think that is for you to decide as you are the writer
    But I was thinking perhaps in can be called "Mystery of the Trivial Rose." Is cony but the only one I could think of.
    Your writing here is a beautifully dark write and a pleasure to read.
    Take heed and goodluck to you and your writings.

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Interesting indeed...I wouldn't exactly say a dark poem, but a mixture of dark and great love. You have a way with words and I must say, I love the background to the story. :) -5-