Comments : The Pain

  • 18 years ago

    by Deaths Maiden

    Short, sweet and beautifully dark.
    Well done

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie

    Thats really really good

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    Short yet so simple and true. Love it 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lexie

    Great job, beautifully written!

  • 18 years ago

    by LostSoul

    It's so short! MAKE IT LONGER. It is so good. I like all your work. Great job. 5/5.

    MAKE IT LONGER