...god that was a good poem. is that a real story?

THAT WAS REALLY GOOD AND POWERFUL. GOOD JOB! -CHASITY

So long but I couldnt stop reading it when I started. The story is so sad and beautiful...

Damn that poem was good and i read ur profile u have a my space too well who doesnt well u also said ur an abused kid well thats messed up but me too shit ma pops hits me jus cuz well keep ur head up gurl and keep writing cus u got a talent shit i write too but i dont post ma poems up cus i dont like when other people know how i feel cus then all they do is say awwwwww and that anit really gonna help now is it so yea gurl hit me up when u got a chance iight then peace
eloisa

Wow really good poem your so good at writing im sorry i have ot talked to you in a wile or read your poems i have been too depressed to hope to talk soon
xoxo alyssa xoxo

Omg wow. that was really good... keep it up x

This is one of the best poems I read keep writng although it was foucused on depression it is beatiful

I thought it was really good, it hooked me because i knew someone just like that...but her dad didn't get out of jail...keep up the great writing

That was great. very well written. it brought tears 2 my eyes. keep up the great work.

Omg Amanda, This is such a GOOD Poem! I loved it, Your so talented girl!
Keep doing what you do best!

*Blood Shot Eyes*

This is really good work i love the stroy line xox fallen

This is so amazing!! i dont know what to say about it! i love it so much and its really sad but words just wont come to my mind! man anyway great job, love it,
love and death:
rain

Omg! this is probably one of the best poems i've ever read, and probably one of the most horribly true! it gave me shivers as i read it, and i almost cried. you are a very talented writer, keep up the good work. be the voice of truth!

WOW you are a great write I have been reading most of your poems and I love them their so true specially this one!

That was amazing...true story?? you dont have to tell me...
xxxx
abby

Wow!!! it was a really good poem.. i meant great! it had a good flow.. and i do i agree with what u said that (authorities) had to listen and not just brush off people's (especially kid's) complain thinking its just for attention... cos it might end up being true and too late for them to do anything....

again,, amazing job i gave it a 5/5...

(wish i was this good)

kaila

Wow! haha! read it again.. lol