Wow awsome poem. very well written. I loved it. keep up the good work, and thanks for commenting on my poem.

~ItalianStallion A.K.A. Joe~

Okay I don't know what is wrong with this i think it is perhaps the last line but something throughouit the poem seemed weird the only thing i can point out is the last line 2nd stanza...very odd...

anyhow besides that small feeling of something being off, good job

4/5

That was nice, a couple in love...sweet.
It had a nice feeling to it.

Good Writing!
beth