Wow...that's just...wow....i love it, the flow was a little choppy, but it was still a great write....keep it up!

and if you ever need to talk or anything, you can pm me...take care *hugs*

-brittnay-

First, i wanted to thank you for commenting on my poems so i figured i would read yours, i've read a few already and i've liked them all so far...you are a good writer and sometimes, writing about how you feel can make the best ones. keep up the good work. oh and if you ever want to chat or anything my yahoo messender is just_me2032