Wow... i looooooove it!!! it's original. you could try

"My mind and body are held by the demons under my bed.
It is only but a matter of time
Before I walk those bright steps leading to the sky."

... for the last three lines... amazing poem!! keep it up!
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Hey i liked the poem the way it was!! it was really good i thought!! keep up the good work and stay strong!! bye bye EJ