Dude it was such a sweer and happy poem but at the end all happyness went away its a good poem dont get me wrong

Thats a okay poem. i liked some of ur rhymes. it was sad too, but kepp written there good.
*keep smiling*
`~*Tessa*`~

Ah seems very clear to me..
Dont give up, its a nice piece :)

Wow this totally rox!
5/5
and thanx buncheZ for the comment on my poem!

This is so cute. but sad because i dont have my love anymore. and it sucks.

First of all i think this is one of the most amazing poems i have ever read!!! and i really mean that. great job!!!! i can totally relate to this, thats why i like it so much.. second of all you shouldn't be thinking of not writing cuz you are amazing!!!! keep it up. also if you get the chance check out my poems.

VERY GOOD! i really liked it alot...
u should never give up writing either...
ur very talented!!! keep it up
byeee

Hey! nice poem...... as i often say..... "let your heart speak"..... i heard your when i read your poem.... nice job !!!!

J'ai bcp aimé celui la.. dont give up !! i totally get it.. keep it up and keep in touch ! bizzz

Sams, this is a poem I guess we can all relate to because we have no doubt been with who we thought was the one and then something happens to change it whether it be a move, a mutual agreement or one of us wasn't truly in love.
Anyway, I like it because it says so much of how you felt for this person and how they made you feel that the ending was a hit in the face.

Great work, Em