Truly sensational

Hey hun,
oh i love how u write, everything is so sincere. its like i could feel everything u said as tho it was meant for me, and if u look up, well, others seem to feel that way too. now thats talent! lol i don't know jamie but i sure hope she appriciates how sweet u really r.
u such an artist,
i look forward to reading more,
ttyl
xoxo
*rach*

Awww i love this poem your really good xoxo

Bravo, good job, keep it up man
5/5

Jammal

Hey Al..Yet again

I Love Everything you write, you know that aye?

This one is so good!

Kate.

Wow.. this was so amazing... your such a great writer this peice just flowed wonderfully... very nice job and keep it up...

sammie

Another great poem man,
you are a great writer.
and another 5/5

Very very very well written. love the poem!!!

Beautifully penned. I especially like this part:

"For like the sun, your beauty glows,
In every ounce of priceless pose,
With striking rays of loving lore,
To bask in light which you deplore."
Nice word choice and imagery!

Awwwh, this was beautiful.
I enjoyed the flow and rhyme scheme and the wording was a pleasure to read.
My favourite part was the imagery used, I think you did a wonderful job on this.

That's so beautiful.
Amazing job.
xx

Oh my gosh!!!! this is amazing!! it made me smile after the first few lines! i love it, there's a really good rhythm, and i love the way it rhymes! great job!
5/5!

Forever*Yours

So great and i know exactly how you feel me and my bf live bout 3 and half hours apart cuz he is now attendin college :( he is going to transfer back closer to home this summer but till then its just a dream and its amazing how we talk bout a lot of whats in ur poems the missing longin and hopin and even layin under stars together AWSOME POEM PLZ KEEP WRITIN

Beautiful poem!5/5 keep it up!

That is true. it was beautiful.