I loved it! Your a talented writter.. Never stop writting..Its gonn take you far!

Wow Nikki, that was intense; the picture you painted was superb. It really makes the reader understand the feeling of depression and deep pain. Very well written and great imagery! Take Care! Brooke~

Beautifully written!!! i luv the end "suicide asleep" nice~ 5/5 for sure!! very deep also! XXXXX
JL

Another beautiful write, very powerful. Depression and pain go hand in hand and you did a wonderful job expressing that. Keep writing.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Very emotional. Open and honest with oneself. Well done.

Pete

Hi my name is vicotria. my frienmd nikki just commited suicede and when i saw your name and your peom it just kinda spoke to me

Once again, you are an outstanding poet! I've read a lot of your poems (sorry I've not voted and commented on most of them...they were amazing none the less!) All of your poems seem to have so many emotions put forth and very well represented! True talent! Keep it up!