Comments : Eyes

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    I enjoyed reading this one.
    that was absolutely brilliant.
    specially this part:
    Feet now back on ground,
    Holding hand in hand with care.
    Masked behind a beautiful smile, but
    Acid tears are ruining her insides.
    Slowing down into neutral,
    Saying goodbye to yesturday.

    much love,
    marjan