Thank you! yea its kinda simbolism but i didnt kno if it came across that way so i just stuck it in nature

That was deep! A great way to symbolise certain things! Keep doin what you doin!

Oommmggg!!! this poem is so wonderful, i was feeling sad at the time i read it and, oh i totally felt the loneliness and emotions of it! thx for comments on my poems, and for ur encouragement, u made me feel alot better, this poem is 5/5 deffinatly keep it up! xxxx

Ur welcome! ^.^ u all r amazin writers!! XXXXX
JL

Thank you!

Whoa this one is very powerfull, i felt kind of lonely when i read it, and could relate to it
i love ur stuff!!!

adios!

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