Woah... that was so good, i loved the ending the best, great work =)

*jackie*

Excellent, love it, keep writing, it's obvious you know and have heart behind what your saying, so keep saying how you feel cause it's f'n good poetry

-stacey xxx

Wow touching... i loved it =D

Stay Strong ^_^

*..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

Thank u for reading my poem i hoped you liked it and that was about my best friend my sister but you should keep it up your poems are really good

Wow.. great job, really sad, 5/5