Awesome poem. i love it.

OMG!!! Amazed over here! That was like woah. There was this entire scene in my mind because of the wonderful description! XD. Love it!

This poem is amazing, Its really sad, but you wrote this so beautifully.

"Her back against the wall
her lap catching her tears,
she begins to shake so violently
as she starts to end her fears.

Her blood begins to fall
as crimson as a rose,
we all ask why she left us,
but she is the only one who knows."

I liked the poem a lot.

FANTASTIC

Aww.. that was very sad piece!! seems u really expressed those deep words and it really flowed well. i love the message 5/5