Wow thats realy good and is inspiring me to write another poem =) your writing is realy good thanx 4 commenting on my poetry =)
*hugs* Lana xoxo

This one is awesome.try to write longer more realistic poems though.those are the best.5/5

I don't know why =(...sorry *hugs*...good poem, though....keep it up...i'm always here if you need to talk...

-brittnay-