Wow... brilliant, 5/5

Love this hun...please stay strong.
thanks heaps for the comments...
i miss you more than you could imagine xoxo

That was gr8.. sory bout wat happend. if its true .. i loved the emotion u brought about in this poem... i lykd ur rhyme a lot.. not forced at all
gr8 goin
take care

Excellent poem, Although this has never happened to me.. I can just imagine how bad it is thanks to your poem.. keep up the good writing :)

Woah! That was good. I love your style and your rhyme scheme is awsome! This poem flows so well and not a single rhyme sounds forced. I love it! Great work! 5/5! Keep it up!

OMG loves it it was just yeah it was great and awsome and fantastic and just really gooooooooood

I love ur poem is sad 2 but i relate to dat cuz sumthing like dat happen to me... keep on writing ur great! =)

Good poem, n great message. i wish i could shove this in one of my old friends face and tell them to read it because thats how i felt!! 5/5