Comments : Too bad you kept it from me

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Wow.... great poem.. your truely a great poet 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    MMMM im not sure about a title for this one but im sure that it was a great poem. an amazing piece hun. keep it up! 5/5

    Much Love
    ~*hAiLy*~

  • 18 years ago

    by *Friends Are Stars*

    Great poem hunni, love ya xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Me&You (simply magical)

    Whoa this poem had depth.........by the end of it my mouth had dropped open and lets not even start with my breathing....it went all shallow lol. This poem was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    luv jess xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Brokeback

    Really beautiful !

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by David

    Tapered dreams, you know how to write. im david from texas. write me back.