Wow :D
Its great it has such good meaning and is really true..
Like Taylor said they are unanswered question but important..
The flow was great and your words used were great they all fitted together and it was just right I guess :D
There was many great parts i this im not gonna type them but I was stuck from the begining..well done :D

Keep it up and good luck with the charity gig :D

xXx

Great song! you did a great job! i wish i could hear it played. keep up the good work!
crystal

Excellent, would love to hear this!!! x

I would definatly enjoy hearing this song performed!! great job keep it uppp!!