Rawr

Lol

(not a haiku btw)

Awww.. i loved this! it was so powerful and beautiful.. very nice use of words, made it an enjoyable read! the only thing is, the second part only has two lines and it should have three..

Waves leaves rocks scattered, broken
^ i think it should be "leave"

And drags pieces down.
^ and "drag"

great poem, very energising and interesting! 5/5

Thanks Jessy. Fine Sean!

Poem is actually suppose to be called Tanka #44

Superb Haiku.
Good work!

God Bless!

I like the idea and you should probably change the title to Tanka #44, just so that people don't mistake this poem as a haiku. I ike these two lines the most:

Find my teardrop in the sea
If you want me to forget.

Great job, and keep it up! 5/5

With all due respect,
Hatori
The Illusionist