Awww!! I just love poems that makes my eyes bounce from line to line! You did a wonderful job writing this and I know one your "true" knight in shining armor will come and sweep you off your feet! Beautiful write!
~Chelsey~

Nice one, you could've done better i think. in a few lines, the rhymes seem forced. Keep writing and smiling....
5/5, take care, always believe in love, amit