*rolls eyes* not good...ugh...

How can you say Bush doesn't care? You remind me of that mother that says Bush killed her son. The men and women in Iraq volunteered to be in the military...they knew that there was a chance that they might go to war. My brother is over there now. Everybody over there knew what they were getting themselves into when they joined the military. I am in the Marine Corps. I have been to Iraq twice. I have to go back in September. ....i did not like this poem at all...

I never said bush dont care i said it seems he dont care
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and i know that volunteered to go but we should have went after bin louden he is the one that bombed the towers i am glad they got sodom but get ben or come home i am tired of our men and women dieing it should have been done along time ago and that is how i feel and i have the right to feel any way i wan I AM TIRED THE THE WAR AND ANY BODY WHO ISNT IS CRAZY

Hey
No I like your poem. Alot. My uncle is in Iraq and I tottaly agree. Bush dosent give a f ***. I really dont think he does. And I can not wait for all of them to come home!

Great Job!
Allison

To be completely honest, I really didnt care for this one, in a way it just wasn't...flowing like your other one did, and ..haha well call it political, but i'm a bush fan, sorry though, even without the political, its just not great..3/5, sorry!

Wow..great poem. i wrote something like that a while back when it first started.

I agree w/ littleleatherneck..i mean they werent forced to go there and plus u should be gratefull for what they are doing..there keeping you free....its a GREAT honor to be soldier in the U.S u should look up to what there doing and be grateful...ya who isnt sick of this war...but its not going no where till they get what they need done....

This poem was really good , I agree whole heartedly, we started on a mission and now its just drug out...ummmm, wonder when the american people will wake up? Good job!

Thats the truth.

THE LAST TIME OUR COUNTRY WAS THIS SPLIT OVER A WAR, IT WAS THE VIETNAM WAR. IT TOOK HISTORY TO PROVE THAT IT WAS A BAD DECISION WITH OVER 50,000 DEAD.THAT DID NOT CHANGE ANYTHING. VIETNAM IS STILL COMMUNIST. I DO NOT SUPPORT THIS WAR. HOWEVER, I BELEIVE BUSH FELT HE WAS DOING THE RIGHT THING. THAT ALONE DOES NOT MAKE IT RIGHT. AS A COUNTRY WE WERE LOOKING FOR A FIGHT AFTER 911, THE POLICY OF "PRE-EMPTION IS BULL SH--T. GOD HELP US ALL. OH YEAH, YOUR POEM WAS GOOD BUT THE END WAS A LITTLE OUT OF SINC WITH THE OVERALL FLOW.BUT I DID FEEL YOUR EMOTION.