David this is so good !!! i miss ya !!!! get a hold of me sumtime

luv ya

jordan lynn*

Another impressive piece of writing - though someof the parts are hard to make sense of, overall I really enjoyed reading it!

Peace. [Sole]

I am an honest person, but i am also sensetive to feelings.
So i'd like to say, i liked this one. But the flow wasnt as good as i hoped or expected, the emotion was there but not outstanding.
I must give you credit, for the setup and layout, the brackets made the poem all that more enjoyable.

Take care,
Tara-Kay
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