Wow - real passion here - nice wording and powerful images... nice

Great poem Liz. Flowed well and was just beautifully well written. I hope you don't mean break up, and that you just mean you miss your love, either way, hold on tight love, things will shapen up. E> xoxox

Also, I cannot get aim...my computer is ^$@&^$.

Also...your comment:
"It's nice... Very good... But... from experiance... breaken heart can lead you right back... if you're heart is broken... It's not friends I ran to... Just stating what happened to me... But awesome.. Glad things are looking up for you"

Yeah, a broken heart can lead you back, but that's not the way to go. I know you can be strong love...don't give up, please. E> xoxoxo love you hun.

Love always,
Mortie.xxxx

Very great poem.Keep up the good work.

Aw great poem liz. i love it! 5/5 keep it up!

*jenny*