Wow once again, your poems are so good so you can't kill me if my comments are going bad :|
The flow in this was great and I loved this part "oh wait thats the whole poem :("
I loved the idea of the book and the pages and whatnot its original, good work x)

Keep it coming your a very talented person :D
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This poem was just awesome i love it nothing wrong w/ it at all good job 5/5

Great poem. i really understood how much u cared for this girl. i love seeing guys writin love poems. it prooves that not all guys are jerks right? (grr they wouldnt let me cuss GRR!) lol well great poem keep writin ur good.

Wow this one was really good too, i don't know what to say, your a great writer, keep writing, and i'll keep reading,5/5

Omg i absolutely loved it, great job!