^.^ great job!

Wow!! this is really amazing, I really can relate to this poem in somewhat of a way. Deep feeling ans good flow. I loved the stanzas that said:
"If you could see me now
what would you think?
i now dress in all black
and my tears shed when i blink

they fall down me face
travel like a dart
down they go
toward my heart."

Good write, keep it up! , love muches cutie