For your first poem it was excellent.. Well done. And don't give up.

I really liked that and u really should keep writing

This is good, very sad, but good. i think its perfect how its written, it describes the situation well 5/5

I don't know what to say so i'll just rate

I love it. I am so sorry if this is real. Don't die. Please

Omg ur poem was so gud!!!!!!
its realli gud 4 ur 1st poem!!!!