This wuz a really good poem..i luved it..and it reminds me of this guy i used to like and everytime i'd see him or just hear his voice i would always fall back in love with him..and i tried so so hard to get over him...but anyways keep up the good work :-)

Great job, you expressed yourself very well, keep up the good work, check out my poems if you want, leave me some comments, it helps me with my writing