Let him be samz... it just wasnt meant to be. You'll find someone who will appreciate you. I guarantee it.
-A

Man the third stanza is so perfect. I love the melliosmatic stream/puddlish like flow of this piece.

Like I said the third stanza;

"cause the truth is
your just flat out amazing.
and i, i cant trace up."

And I quote again -'i cant trace up.'

*Forgive me I don't usually comment twice ... but my full comment did not post.

What I went on to say is:

I think this is a sweet piece; It's sweet because you gave a fellow tribute who didnt deserve it.

*Those we notice - the centers, the middle of a temporary universe, they dont deserve our praise; that is because ... your praise by comparison to their reality of him - it is an embellishment.

... that is to say - your poem is far more than the fellow will become.

;)

5/5

*Forgive me I don't usually comment twice ... but my full comment did not post.

What I went on to say is:

I think this is a sweet piece; It's sweet because you gave a fellow tribute who didnt deserve it.

*Those we notice - the centers, the middle of a temporary universe, they dont deserve our praise; that is because ... your praise by comparison to their reality of him - it is an embellishment.

... that is to say - your poem is far more than the fellow will become.

;)

5/5

Oh Bogger ....

Now I have to vote on the school computer, my home computer, and my work computer to suffice for the 5/5's ... lol ... blessings

*I will catch up on comments of the other poems soon...take care.