Your poem was so moving that it had me in tears. I can not imagine what you have gone through but i'm sorry. No one should have to go through losing people so dear to them. Luv Nicole =) Kia Kaha!

It's strange when I read your sad poems.
I've been scribbling a few about death, suicide and such, but I don't, in my heart, ever mean them.
I lost someone I loved too, but I know that that someone wants me to stay put, and have a great life.

R.I.P. Blacky

Good. I have commited suiside befor, I drowned my self and was clinicly dead for 20 minutes, it was the most horrible experance of my life, I havent attemped sence. For the record, Hell is a real place. and 20 minutes in there is more pain then I could ever stand.

This is a very good poem, and I am glad you are not planning on commiting suicide, because for all you know you could be the reason someone else is still alive, you and awesome poet 5/5
Love always,
Elissa

Hey this was so sad, stay strong..sorry about your friend

Awww. I'm so sorry about your friend (and the others mentioned on your profile). I know how losing people you love can feel and if you wanna/need to talk, I'm always here--just check out my profile.

-Taylor

That was deep When I read the first part of the profile I was just speechless. I tried to commit suicide like once and I've been cutting myself for 3 years. I'm starting to hate september too because my grandmother died on the 15th. And i had one of my boyfriends who left me for some preppy little white girl ( no offense to those of you ). But i realy feel you and i feel like i am never gonna get through september 06. Let's just hope we all do. - ym

Hi this is cassie..... you are obviously a great person witha huge talent for writing. hang on... i'm here for you... i'm going through the same thing..

It breaks my heart knowng that somebody has to go through all this pain. all you poems show how much of a beautiful soul you are. im posotve your friends are looking down on you and proud of your talent but im sure danny wouldnt want you to mae the same mistake she did. no pain is ever worth u taking your life. you have to hold on through all the pain. remember, there has to be rain in order to see a rainbow...well sorry for getting all Oprah on you lol:P..have a great day. amazing job!..smile*

WOW! That was beautiful! Everyone hates on poems about sadness and depresion but those are the poems that show emotion and make you feel! And you obviously know all about that! WOW!

Omg that maid me cry... i really think someone wants u hear...i mean 4 times and it hasnt worked theres a reason ! i hope the best for u ... one of my best friends was murdered and i took that so hard! she just turned 13 a month b4she died ..its been two years .. but the hardest 2 years of my life!!

This poem is very sad, yet very well written. All I ask, even though I do not know you, do not go this way. & I understand about the thing you said, not planning on doing this, but you should never even think about this. I've had two of my good friends commit suicide. One of them, not to long ago. Chad commited sucide July 20th, 2006. Again. A very good poem. :] 5/5

I really like to read ur poetry. alot of the people i love died iv tryed suicide for like 2 years and still trying anyways keep it up

This is a really good poem. luv it.

xxxx ..::Broken Lullaby::..

This is an excellent poem. It was also very Sad. It really shows such a strong friendship. But remember she is always with you and you don't have to die to be with her. I really hope things get better for you. 5/5

Kalee

Its good you decided to stay. cuz your inspriring me to stay. i luv your poems. rrly. <333