*sits there....speechless*

that's...really sad...very touching...keep up the great work and take care *hugs*

-brittnay- ((5/5))

Great poem... Very good! =D
Please check out my poem "My dad: dead and gone forever" please comment/vote.. I voted a 5 on your poem.. hugs!

Wow! This poem is just so...wow! It tells a tragic story that could make anyone realise how lucky they are to have what they have. It makes you realise that there are always people out there that have it worse. I really like this poem. Keep up the talent! 5/5!

Very well written!! the flow was there, and most importantely, EMOTION! very well written! it was long but it was good!! definately the read! 5/5

Omgosh! this poem had tears in my eyes. it was sooooooooooo sad. excellent rhyming. i loved it

Wow, what a brilliant poem!!

You don't need to apologise for the length at all, some poems are better longer. I think it must have been incredibly painful to write this as you're reaching out to your inner-child, its very important to do that though too. *huggles*

Hope to see some more great poems!

Toni xxx (from xFinding The Lightx)