Comments : The pain

  • 18 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    Liked this one,.. it flowed pretty well,.. there wasnt a consistent rhyme scheme, but i did notice a few lines the blended together, not necessarily rhyming, just going good together, sounding similar but not rhymes.. pretty cool.. 4/5..

  • 18 years ago

    by wendy

    Why so many sad poems..........good but so sad

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    Soo sad, soo true, great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    This one is so sad and like i said before - talk to your friends. Try to talk to someone you trust :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Great job, that is really sad but well written, good job,5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Vegetable

    This poem is really good. The flow is really good, my favorite line is "The endless river of tears" Good work 5/5