This is a very good poem overall. there are some spots that could use a little work
when you said "staying within out of sight" the "within" doesn't really make sence. And "From a great height it stalks
staying within out of sight
From night to sunsrise it feeds
From there to sunset it creeps." throws off the flow because it doesn't have a ryme like the other stanzas.
"Night comes on, you're sorry
underneath the sheets, you're dying, close your eyes, for the last sound will be hoary." this needs some work as well. But other than that it was very good

Awesome stuff! keep it up, man!

This is a pretty good poem. The only thing is, the first line doesn't make sense. A minor grammar error I guess. It didn't ruin the poem however, because on it's own, it's great. Keep up the good work my friend :)

Pretty good.... 5/5! :o) keep up the great work!

Michelle

This poem is good. I like how you named it Para-Noid. It looks cool, lol.

Tiffany.xox.

Very well written. I loved it. I like your style of writing, keep up the amazing peices of poetry.

~Joe~

Its well written but im not sure what you are trying to say.