I loved the details you wrote in the poem. Its amazing and I love the whole plot behind it all. Defianlty deserves nothing below a 5/5. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne

Hey axi babe,
oh this is very sad, i know how u feel, when u want so very badly to help some1 but they won't let u. i especially like the " i wont turn to dust" part, like nomatter how much they try to push u away ull still be there trying to help. very good job, keep it up,
love always,
*rach