Wow that was so touching... absolutly beautiful =)

Stay Strong ^_^

*..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

That wasn't all that bad..suicide isn't my thing..certain things trigger these thoughts so i try to stay away from them..but the rhyme scheme isn't bad..keep em comin..peace

It's so touching and sad and beautiful and nice and great, just fantastic.

Hey, melissa, where have you been, and how it's going with your poetry book?

OMG this was just excellent, your writing is so emotional, the words pull you in i love it xxx