Comments : PROTECT YOUR HEART

  • 18 years ago

    by kiesha

    That was a really good poem. I totally know what you're saying. The 2nd stanza was a little choppy, but it was still really good. It's hard, this year I told myself that I was going to protect my heart, and it just got stolen again. Anyway, keep writing and take care.
    > Kiesha

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    Aww...that is so cute and true!! That is very good advise and I will try to follow it as hard as I can. No guarantees though...lol. I hope that I spelled that right..lol. You are very creative and I like the thought of your poems because it seems as though you put alot of time into them and that is one thing that makes a poet better....I think. 5/5

    TAKE CARE-
    stargazer38