I've tried to help you numerous times, but its hard when you are so stubborn.

"Somebody touch me this broken heart of mine."
-either take out the me or place a comma behind it? =/

Very sad poem. It's very strong though and I love it. Sorry it took me so long to read it. The last time I talked to you was in the chat when my name was 1Loveachother. You probably don't remember because it's been so long, but oh well. Very good poem. The emotion was great and the flow was very very smooth. I loved how in the end you got the point out that it's an urgency. Keep up the good work!! 5/5.

~BJ~