Comments : Xox_not_just_a_brother_xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Aww that kinda reminds me of my brother, great job, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Manda

    You go through so many bad times
    i always wanna be there for you
    but when i see you down or sad
    i just don't know what to do

    i cant help but try
    to make you laugh or make you smile
    but no matter what i say or do
    it only lasts for a little while

    i want to take the pain away
    cause you don't deserve this its true
    why does all the bad things
    have to happen to you?

    yes those parts r very true in man cases of me and my friends. (TIM ESPECIALLY!!! And Sarah but w.e. shes far already lost.) ANYWAYS! Its a great poem. I want to give it like a million starts but I cant :( I can only give 5....... not fair. Well keep writing k? I'll try to get a new poem to u soon. Thanks for the support.

    ~Alwayz, Manda

  • 18 years ago

    by Manda

    Many*