U spelt suicide wrong

Hmm.
I don't know how
to say this without
hurting your feelings...
But your poems.. "james" and this one aren't very good.
When i read them i thought...
this girl has got to be like twelve.
Because you mispelled alot of things.
And the way your feeling isn't clear to me.
And you seem like you're just writeing for the hell of it cause you're bored.
You dont seem like you really care much for it. I am really sorry... just go a little deeper into thought. Take some more time to actually describe what your feeling. I am sorry if i affended you. Good-bye.