Comments : What I want

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    I can only hope you find this love, it is out there somewhere waiting for you, you just have to wait to find it, I am sure you will find this love, the poem was really emotional and showed how you feel well, good luck and take care
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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great poem.

    1 suggestion though. i feel that the line

    "All I want, I can get from you." would be better of as 2 lines. ie.

    All I want,
    I can get from you.

    just a suggestion.